your work really shows, and even though this is rough around the edges it shows if you keep at it there moe you can do with your animation skills. dont stop doing it man
good on ya!
Dealing with people like this is the price you pay when you are involved in any form of an art medium.. you have gotten the personality down with this, very funny cartoon, keep it up!
eh could use work
you should animate the characters more and get some voice acting in there, it would make it seem more professional
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